Stanpai's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Project: WILD CHILD]

I really enjoyed the comedic timing and animation style. It's obviously very rough which is why it's capped out at 3.5 but I really enjoyed this. Great job!

zachdewd responds:

Thanks, I hope to make this a movie of sorts one day!

[My character is move!!]

Pretty drawing, belongs in art portal.

[Five Night at Place(FNAF Parody)]

Needs subtitles or better audio mixing. This was very funny.

TrohPee responds:

Thanks for the technical feedback!

[Dogs Without Peace]

I really liked the shots and art in this. It was quite good to look.
Biggest flaw is the microphone quality in the voiceover. It doesn't match up with the quality of the rest. That's why I give a 4.5.

[Super Schmack Bros]

Funny illustrations but this is essentially just an image slideshow, with the only animation being in Sora's key hitting him. I've been tough on people before because their "animations" were barely more than a powerpoint presentation, but in this case it's even less than that. It's quite literally an image slideshow.

1 star for the good VO and funny drawings, but spongebob dramatic closeups alone do not a movie make.

[Temmies 2]

This gets a two because it made me laugh, but this is kind of a total mess. I enjoyed myself.

[YouTube Intro!]

For a YouTube intro I think this is a bit too long. I would say you could just use the first 5-10 seconds and that would be sufficient for most videos. That being said, the assets were cute. You could use more smoothing on the things that pan across the screen, as some of them were moving so slow it was almost jagged.

Keep working toward your dreams!

CosmicCutie01 responds:

Thank you very much and I'm still learning how to use Toon Boom. ^^

[2022.]

I kind of enjoyed this, the choice of music was comfy and overall monologue was relatable, but the problem is that I couldn't really HEAR most of the monologue because of the imbalance of volume. The music and SFX were way too loud and this detracted from my ability to hear your words. The art isn't anything fancy, but the lipsync was actually on point and I appreciated what little bits of movement there were.

Keep it up and adjust those volume levels!!

stevetherapper responds:

Thanks for your review. Think of this as kind of a warmup animation. This definitely isn’t my best animation, mainly because of the style that I used only for this one and because this was a rush to get out, though the volume imbalance is definitely fair and I’ll try to work on that for my upcoming animations. For this one, I might just add some closed captions to the YouTube version of this, so be on the lookout for that.

Thanks again for your constructive criticism, be sure to check in with my newer animations every once in a while. :)

[popeye the sailor man love mc donald's]

I'm laughing more than I should which is why this got up to 2.5. It felt like a Mike Matei bit.

[Take it]

Only giving this a 1 because it's not long enough for the movie portal. I think it would be better suited for the art portal. I like this, but have issues with the anatomy. The necks on the kids are really long, for example. Also, the clown slides up but the background doesn't move, so perhaps that was what you were going for but it didn't really come out right.

Nonetheless, I hope you will continue to upload! I love the clown!

Elraz15 responds:

i want upload it on art portal like a gif but i lost the file so put in movie, also i undertand the score so maybe next time i upload something more longest and better :)